Eric's Comments

Hi, I'm Eric. I'm glad to get a chance to look at your site and give you some feedback!

Overall: 

  • The home page is excellent! I love the main image, and it's great that you have the links on the bottom. I noticed that the links are from the temporary website address, so you will need to update the links so they work.
  • Please translate all of the pages into the correct languages. If you don't, just unpublish that page for the time being.
  • On top of every page with media (images, video, PDFs, etc.), please put a sentence or two of explanation so the website visitor knows what they are looking at.

Feeback on specific pages:

  • On the page "péen-lai-ren-lai-vax", I think the cover page image is too large. It takes me a long time to scroll past it to get to the primer. And I think you want people to see the primer right away! :) So think about how you might either reduce the size or delete the image. Also, I'm not sure why there is a gallery of images at the bottom of this page? The text next to the images has not been translated into English, so I don't know what these pictures are. (See, this is why translations are important, haha!)
  • For the page "dak-sing-leung-vax" I have two comments:
    • The playlist is off-center, and I'm not sure why. I think it would look better in the middle, either in a one-column section, or in the middle  of a three column section that is 25%/50%/25%.
    • The file names of these videos are not good. A good file name is helpful not only for the website visitor but also for Google and Bing so they can send more traffic your way! You can edit the video titles here.
  • On the page "lai-jáox-vax-yaok-yaw-cào-kàeeng" I think you have too much media. You have a PDF and then three video playlists. Usually each page will only have one PDF or one playlist. So maybe these should be four separate pages? You will have to figure out what to do. This is just my advice.

Overall, this is a great website with wonderful content! I look forward to seeing the final product!

Blessings from the USA,

Eric

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